Writing
a basic 5 paragraph essay
Oh no! You have to write that big paper for school! You're
dreading it. Your afraid it will take forever, you're not sure
how to start. What if you fail? Most students experience
anxiety when writing formal papers. As a professional English
and essay writing tutor, I would like to offer some tips to
help you make the most of your essay writing.
Believe it or not, I never really knew or learned how to
write an essay until my first semester of college. When I
started my first semester and chose college writing as one of
my classes, everyone, including my advisor, told me that I
should wait at least until the second or third semester to
take that class. They explained how difficult it was and
cautioned me about taking it so soon. Well I took it anyway
and I'm very glad I did! The instructor was awesome, she knew
just how to explain things so that students could understand.
She used many, many real life student examples. We were given
handouts with past student papers to compare and contrast.
They were all corrected and had suggestions written in the
margins. They were rated excellent, good, fair and poor. Using
this method really helped me to understand how to write a
great essay and taking this class first helped me with the
papers for all of my other classes.
Every essay begins with a basic outline. Learning this
outline will help you tremendously in the organization
department. Now if you are like I was, those formal outlines
with the roman numerals, numbers and letters scare the
daylights out of you. They are very confusing and trying to
remember what goes under a roman numeral, a number or a letter
can be very distracting. So from this point on, throw those
things out the window! (You may be required to write an
outline in this fashion so make sure you don't throw it very
far.) The following outline should help you with your basic
essay. Keep in mind that this is just a basic outline and you
will need to revise your writing several times before it
achieves perfection.
Fill in the blanks to help you get started with a rough
idea for your thesis statement.
I want to prove that ______________________ because
(1)______________, (2)________________ and
(3)________________.
A 5 paragraph essay should have an Introduction with a
thesis statement, 3 body paragraphs that back up your thesis
statement and a concluding paragraph.
EXAMPLE:
Paragraph 1 = INTRODUCTION
AND THESIS
Include general information on your topic here
THESIS STATEMENT: Cats need love, healthcare
and good nutrition in order to stay
healthy.
Paragraph 2 = MAIN
POINT 1 - LOVE
Includes information for reason (1) above
Topic sentence: Love is one important
aspect to having a healthy cat.
Supporting sentence(s): When you show your cat that she is loved
she will feel good on the inside. Research has shown that cats that
are showered with a lot of love by
their owners live healthier longer lives. (Cite research)
Concluding sentence: A loved cat is a happy healthy cat.
Paragraph 3 = MAIN
POINT 2 - HEALTHCARE
Includes information for reason (2) above
Topic sentence: Along with lots of love, cats need to visit the
veterinarian regularly to stay healthy
and prevent disease.
Supporting sentence(s): Regular vet visits can prevent diseases and health
issues such as bladder or kidney problems. They can also help
control health problems that already
exist. Your Veterinarian can give you tips on how to keep your cat's
health at its best.
Concluding sentence:
Paragraph 4 = MAIN
POINT 3 - NUTRITION
Includes information for reason (3) above
Topic sentence: Eating the right kind of foods
is essential in keeping your cat in good health.
Supporting sentence(s):
Concluding sentence:
Paragraph 5 = CONCLUSION
Restates your thesis statement using different words/phrases and
leaves a lasting impression on your reader.
Cats cannot survive without proper care. Love, healthcare and
nutrition all play a vital role in the health and well being of your
loving pet. Don't risk losing your pet too soon due to lack of
proper care!
As you begin your paper, the first step is to
create the outline. Then you can fill it in as you go and finally
put it all together for a finished product. You can work on any
section you would like and complete the sections in any order that
you feel comfortable with. Some find it easier to fill in the
information that they already know first and go from there.
Your introduction will give basic information
about your topic. The intro usually includes a basic statement,
question, history or statistics about a given topic. The final
sentence of your intro will usually be your thesis statement.
Your thesis statement, although commonly defined
as "What your paper is about." Is actually "What you
plan to prove." If you think of it as what you plan to prove,
you will be able to come up with a more clear statement that will
help guide the rest of your paper. Your thesis statement should
always state exactly what you plan to prove and should also give at
least 3 reasons why or three specific examples. These three items
will then become the basis for your three body paragraphs.
Your first body paragraph will explain your first reason stated
in your thesis. Your second body paragraph will explain your second
reason and so on. Each body paragraph will be like a
"mini" essay. They should have at least five sentences
each (five paragraphs.) Each will start with a topic sentence
(thesis.) You should then include at least three supporting
sentences with examples that prove your topic sentence (3 body
paragraphs.) And finally, each paragraph will have a concluding
sentence (conclusion.) Continue this process for each body
paragraph. Filling in the outline step by step will help you stay
organized.
The last part and often the most difficult part of the essay is
your conclusion. Your conclusion will sum up your entire paper in
one paragraph, restate your thesis in different words and leave a
lasting impression on your reader. The reason for the conclusion and
why it is one of the most important parts of an essay is because it
is the last thing your reader will read and the part they will
remember most. If you want to make an impression, you want your
reader to remember your point. The final sentence in the example
above leaves a lasting impression on your reader because it instills
a certain amount of fear in your reader. While it does not come out
and actually say that if you do not care for your pet correctly it
will die, it basically instills that thought in your reader's mind.
And that's all there is to it. Give this format a try and see if
your writing improves. Keep in mind that there are many more
techniques and tips that will improve your writing but let's take it
one step at a time.
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